The real thing
You just brought a new level of music into newgrounds.
No, I wouldn't call this punk rock, but it sure as hell is label'd as "awesome".
And by the way, "You have voices, use them?"
-Good screaming is hard as hell, keep trying. Without the screaming this kind of music would be as good as pop, moron. We dont want that, do we?
The best tip I cant give you right now, is don't listen to these people that want you to change, because there's a lot of people that really enjoy this kind of music, with the screaming.
I somewhat think that the lyrics are a bit messed up, but I don't really recommend a change, because that would change the song overall.
Would you pay 30$ to go and freak out to this live?
Yeah, I guess. I've heard better, but I would.
And to be different from these people down there, I actually think the voice is the best thing in this song.
-Which is probably because I'm a singer myself, and syncing voice and melody is kinda hard.
Go on people, do your own stuff, your own way.
^St.Jimmy
(for the newgrounds standard, this is totally a 10)